Shocked, the girl saw and Island in the distance. She was so relieved that she finally found land. Quickly, the girl jumped out of her boat. She laid down on the hot golden sand looking up at the burning hot sun.
That night the girl was laying down in her shelter wondering if she'll ever get home. Suddenly, she heard a noise in the bushes. A young boy suddenly walked out of them. The girl screamed and then the boy screamed! They stopped screaming and stared at each other with curiosity. They sat down and said "Hi, nice to meet you" the young boy said with a smile. The girl as well said "nice to meet you to". The girl offered him to sleep under her shelter for that night. The boy agreed with delight.
The next morning The girl woke up, she looked to her right and the boy was gone! She looked everywhere for him but he was no where to be found. The girl walked up and down the beach wanting to find that boy again. Suddenly, she found a boat on the beach. She ran up to it and got into it and started paddling.
She finally made it home and all is well, but she was still thinking about that young boy she found that night.
Wednesday, 22 May 2019
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It was really good. It made me think what happened to the boy and where is he.
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