It was mid afternoon in Canada and everyone was getting ready for a big celebration.There were people hanging up decorations and lighting a big bomb fire. But that night things didn’t go as planned. People were dancing around the bomb fire and that was when the wolfs arrived. People quickly jumped to there feet, grabbed their kids and started to run. Desperately, the wolf’s chased after the village people wanting something to eat. The chief ,his wife and the new born baby lead everyone to the canoes. Everyone got into a canoe and started paddling to the other side of the lake were they would be safe. The wolves jumped into the water and quickly swam after the village’s. The chief and his wife lead everyone to safety.
But then. The wolves caught the villages up. The People started to sprint to safety were the wolves can’t go. Luckily they lost the wolves in the dense forest. Everyone stopped in a hurry. The people were relieved that the wolves had left them alone. The villages started to build little shelters and will stay there for that night.
The next morning The chief got some strong men and went to hunt for the wolves. The looked everywhere but couldn't find them. Then they heard some howling. They rushed to where the howling was, and they saw the wolves. They got out there spears and killed them. That night they had a big celebration. And the wolves were never seen again.
The end
the part that I like the most was that you followed your plan. but the baby was already born and in your plan it says that he was born after they cross the lake.
ReplyDeleteHi Macy I really like your piece of writing. It is nice and descriptive and also I like how you said they were setting up for a celebration but then the wolf's came. you don't need to work on anything.
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