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Friday, 5 July 2019




This animation is based on my narrative. It was fun but is really boring. I didn't get to finish it so don't judge me.  I will do the voice over when I've finished my animation.
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  1. Anonymous25 July 2019 at 14:14

    Kia ora. I am Elle from Gisborne Intermediate School.
    I really liked how you added speech bubbles so the people watching could read about what is happening
    I learnt that using more slides make the animation look better than before, even if it takes time
    I think that even though you haven't finished the animation it was overall really entertaining in a good way. Also how did the deer die?
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    Elle

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    1. Anonymous26 July 2019 at 10:18

      Hi Elle. Thanks for the feed back. Your question was how did the deer die? The thing called death touched it so it died

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  2. Anonymous25 July 2019 at 14:18

    Kia ora. I am Cassidy from Gisborne Intermediate School.
    I really liked the concept behind the story in your animation. Did you make this up on the spot?
    I learnt that you had fun making the animation, although you consider the session boring.
    Maybe you could slow down the slides that have speeches in them. Either way I enjoyed your animation a lot.
    Please visit my blog
    here
    Mā te wā
    Cassidy

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