Kia Ora Macy, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
You have written some extraordinary similes here! I especially like your fourth one. It makes me think of a beautiful princess dress all the colours of the sunset. New Zealand truly has some beautiful sunsets. The sky turns so many different colours. My personal favourite is when it turns a rosie pink. What are your favourite colours to see in the sunset?
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Kia Ora Macy, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteYou have written some extraordinary similes here! I especially like your fourth one. It makes me think of a beautiful princess dress all the colours of the sunset. New Zealand truly has some beautiful sunsets. The sky turns so many different colours. My personal favourite is when it turns a rosie pink. What are your favourite colours to see in the sunset?
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Hei konā mai,
Shannon