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Friday, 9 August 2019

Climate change

If I could get rid of one problem in the world it would be climate change. I want to fix this problem because it is wrecking our earth. All the ice is melting and the polar bears have no home or food to eat. It has polluted our waterways. Sea animals are eating the plastic and dying. If we can’t fix what we have created we have nowhere to live.

I really want to fix climate change because I don’t want to be living with rubbish piles everywhere. I don’t want to be drinking dirty water out of the tap. I don’t want to be swimming in the sea with rubbish all in the water. I don’t want to hear the polar bears have been extinct by having nowhere to live or having no food to eat. I want to live in a healthy clean planet.


this week we have been learning how to write paragraphs. I wrote about climate change
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1 comment:

  1. Megan NL18 August 2019 at 20:33

    Well done, Macy. You have written two great paragraphs about a problem you would like to solve. I think you have given some great examples. For a third and fourth paragraph, you could write about how we could do something about Climate Change.

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