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Wednesday, 31 July 2019

1.  When Marial got eaten by the lion ,Salva was to scared to sleep. His uncle reassured him that he's got a gun, and he will keep watch all night. Salva got over his fears by trusting his uncle ,and understanding if a lion did come his uncle will shoot it. I haven't experienced a fear.

2. Salva had faced so many challenges ,i'm surprised he's not dead yet. I think the worst one is when the shooting happened at salva's school and all he could do was run. The desert is also a bad one because salva and the tribe has to love long periods of time without food. And because boiling hot in the desert.

3. Uncle Jewiir helped Salva by keeping him assured that he could rest soon. I think without uncle Jewiir Salva would've given up and probably would've died. Uncle jewiir would've helped me life by assuring me everything will be ok.

4. Salva just has to keep going and not giving up. The best sentence that says all of this is when uncle jewiir says " your almst there Salva"

Tuesday, 30 July 2019

1. The group doesn't want Salva to come along because it's another mouth to feed and he is to young to come with them. I kinda agree with the group because Salva is another mouth to feed. but I also disagree with them because Salva should have a chance to live.

2. Water dictates Nya's by having to wake up every morning and has to walk for ages to get water for her and her family. Something the dictates my life is having good education.

3. Getting honey from the tree, walking for a month with out food and not knowing if he will ever see his family again. I think Salva is doing a good job trying to survive. 

4. Nya is really close to the lake so she doesn't have to walk far. She doesn't have to wake up as early anymore. It is more safe for her now because she doesn't need to walk as far. 

Friday, 26 July 2019

A long walk to water .1


  1. we learn't that Salva's life and culture from the first chapter was that he had 3 brothers and 2 sisters                          and he went to school everyday and he had to learn Arabic . Salvas's life is nothing like mine.                
2. If I was selva circumstance. I feel alone and I wouldn't know were I would be going. I would feel worried that my family would've been killed. And If they are alive where would they be
3. If I was Nya I would feel annoyed that i couldn't go to school. I feel tired and sore. I would feel stressed that if I don't get the right enough water.
4. The tribes are able to tell eachother apart by seeing symbols on their head.                                    

The shed on the lake

Sitting in my little fishing boat, I looked over to my old rusty house. I saw someone's car pull up on my rocky driveway. I wondered who would be at my house at 9:00 in the morning. I paddled back to land and I put the fishing boat back in it’s shed. I walked up the steps to my house and I saw a guy coming out of his car. I didn’t recognise him. I watched him for a little bit. Suddenly, he smashed a window and climbed into my house. I quickly got out my phone to call 111 but there was no cell reception. I quickly had to make a plan b. I ran to my gardening shed and got a spade. I quietly walked into my house, and started to look for the man. Then, I saw the man taking stuff off the shelves. I yelled out to him “ leave my stuff alone!!”. He dropped the stuff that was carrying. But then, he pulled out a gun. I begged him for mercy but he shot anyway. The bullet went right through my shoulder. He quickly grabbed my stuff and ran away. Lying on the ground, I heard his car driving away. I looked at were the bullet had hit me. It had gone all the way through. I walked to my bathroom were I would find the first aid kit. I wrapped a bandage around the were the bullet had hit me. 

Friday, 5 July 2019




This animation is based on my narrative. It was fun but is really boring. I didn't get to finish it so don't judge me.  I will do the voice over when I've finished my animation.